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Senses Deluded
Contributed by
HERO
on
Friday, 4th March 2011 @ 08:39:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I lie awake till the break of dawn
My thoughts are racing, on and on
I think the me I am today
Is not who I am in any way
It this the me I want to be?
Or am I concentrating reality.
I just cant tell whos in my head
But the person whos laying here in my bed
May not wake up the same tomorrow
I sense a storm or regret and sorrow
I close my eyes and predict my life
While struggling with an internal strife
I hope I find some even ground
But tonight, the real me cant be found.
I lay with insight that makes me wonder
If the thoughts that race through my head tonight
Will be coherent and clear at the break of dawn
I just cant say, Im neither wrong nor right.
I just dont know anymore
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HERO
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2011-03-04 20:39:46]
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Re: Senses Deluded
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by eggflipper on
Saturday, 5th March 2011 @ 06:45:28 AM AEST
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| Well done. I got the sense of lost and frustration with the situation. Something we have all felt before. Keep looking but be careful not to over look the me. Sad but true. Good capture of the moment. |
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