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Sleep Slumber and dreams
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Saturday, 5th March 2011 @ 09:11:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I am so tired I just want to sleep
To put my head down disappear deep
Into tranquillity a place of no thought
To receive the gift that can not be bought
Emptiness, a void a place we all need
To refresh my mind and give it a feed
I begin to drift my eyes shut close
Before I know I am in the middle of a doze
First into REM with thoughts of you
I have crazy dreams of what to do
I disappear into peace the black hole
My mind yearns for this ultimate goal
The morning sun begins to rise
Into REM I go to receive my prize
More crazy dreams until I wake
To realise the day and whats in stake
Tuesday, 17 August 2010
11:47:21 AM
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Re: Sleep Slumber and dreams
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by emystar on
Saturday, 5th March 2011 @ 07:43:22 PM AEST
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Like magic.
Awesome writing.
blessings, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Sleep Slumber and dreams
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 12:24:56 AM AEST
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| This reminds me of the state that Buddhists seek and the strength of the mind as it invades the tranquility with dreams and thoughts such that this is not easy to achieve........into tranquility a place of no thought to receive the gift that cannot be bought, eloquently expressed can feel the struggle well written. |
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Re: Sleep Slumber and dreams
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by hacktastic on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 01:51:46 AM AEST
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This type of meter drives me crazy
It makes my eyes get all hazy
Is it this style is quick and lazy?
Eh, I am no poetic Scorsese.
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