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walls ain't you
Contributed by
poeticjestix
on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 05:02:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I look at you
your hair is wet
you look at me
and we both smile
love may not last
but we're worth the bet
I'll be yours forever
at least for a while
the moment is now
the moment's forever
we may only have one thing
but at least it's together.
Together in love
together in need
I'll love you forever
a love true indeed
i'll wish for a future
that I want to deliver
time may cause a stall
it will break my heart
for there and then I
will see our love wither
not for want of trying
poles switched, we will part
the moment is now
the moment's forever
we may only have one thing
but at least it's together.
Together in love
together in need
I'll love you forever
a love true indeed
I sit in my room
I look at the walls
there's nothing left of you
just hurt and regret
from love I've been sacked
I'm dumped, that's my role
and all I can think of
is your hair, and it's wet
the moment is gone
no longer forever
now there is nothing
and we're not together.
No longer in love
though I've not lost need
I'll love you forever
a love true indeed
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Re: walls ain't you
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by eggflipper on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 05:06:11 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. No longer in love/though i've not lost need. Love that line. captured the moments after (long after). The pitfalls are known yet still worth the journey. |
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Re: walls ain't you
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by Yosif-Wish on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 05:13:09 PM AEST
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hey great poem, sad, but no bitter, with a sense for me anyways of optimism. i like that in a love lost poem
captured alot of things i'm going through right now. thanks |
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Re: walls ain't you
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 11:41:46 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
Awesome.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: walls ain't you
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by Dirkj on
Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 01:53:09 AM AEST
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| Great writing , really enjoyd it |
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