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End
Contributed by
amatayo
on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 08:20:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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For whatever reason I can not take another step.
I lie in bed where my dreams have crashed, the den where my mind is unkept.
Your words those soft and beautiful exspressions turned cold.
This pillow where my anger unload.
My home, my room, my sadness does reign.
As I regret my foolish proclaim.
Your picture which sits on my table only haunts.
The smile your eyes my future only taunts.
I'm sitting only living to forget.
Wishing that I had a license to wed or for me to inside your heart permit.
I feel so low without you to say your hi.
I feel like I betrayed you when I said goodbye.
I wanna be so much more then your friend.
And the pain of it all is why we had to end.
Copyright ©
amatayo
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2011-03-06 20:20:42]
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Re: End
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 10:14:35 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Great writing. I know the feelings.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: End
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 12:57:47 PM AEST
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| unrequited love and failed relationships all hurt. But when the pain goes away, you will be stronger. |
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Re: End
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by Mando on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 08:54:58 AM AEST
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| I ike your writing,but to every end there's a new beginning |
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Re: End
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by Mando on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 08:54:58 AM AEST
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| I ike your writing,but to every end there's a new beginning |
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