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Taking the Wheel
Contributed by
CherryReadPoet
on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 10:16:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I am silent.
I am still.
Crazy, am I?
Crazy that I hold to my will?
Do I speak in rhymes?
A rhythm, or meter?
If I play your games,
Does that make me a cheater?
No.
Not on my watch.
I am who I am,
You can't make me stop.
Yes, this is everlasting,
Your hold on me is forever,
If they ask me to give it up,
My answer will be never.
True, I know my luck
Isn't quite the same
As it once was when,
It wasn't so strange to say your name.
Why did I obtain these feelings,
After the depart,
And the change that overcame me,
In the bottom of my heart?
I don't understand and I'm confused,
On the way of how I feel,
From now on I'll call the shots,
I'm taking over the wheel.
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CherryReadPoet
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Re: Taking the Wheel
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by emystar on
Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 12:02:38 AM AEST
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Great writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Taking the Wheel
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 05:40:46 PM AEST
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I loved the style on this one. The ending so powerful! Good work.
Michelle |
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Re: Taking the Wheel
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by Mando on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 08:48:11 AM AEST
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| Very good I took some time and read this twice and it gave me motivation to take the wheel on some things going on in my life |
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