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to whom it may concern
Contributed by
pat517
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Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 10:53:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love is something that can't be wasted
Love is that sweetest thing i have tasted
I gave it my all and nothing less
with you, i felt truly blessed
we were pretty good you and I
now Im here alone in my room about to cry
"No man cries" people say
But there is nothing really else to do today
That which brought me joy is no longer
I can't see how this pain will make me stronger
it makes me think in what i believe in
now that im forever bleedin
did you really love me the way i did you?
or was it just a word with no meaning that you knew
I as there for you when u needed me
I was all i could be
its not how i envisioned it
with this pain to the point of imprisonment
i apologize for not making you happy
im sorry that this poem is sappy
but its what i feel and that is true
all i can say is i still love you
~Patrick S. Simental~
~ March 7, 2011~
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Re: to whom it may concern
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by RachelSixx on
Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 06:56:27 PM AEST
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| beautifully written, you can really feel the emotion. great job. |
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