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Lifes End
Contributed by
ArkAngelGabriell
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Thursday, 10th March 2011 @ 07:41:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Marry me death, my soul is your keeper
Into my heart I trust you, the grim reaper
Heed not a warning life, for you are my foe
Vengeance is mine life, you reap what you sow
All that was, and
All that is,
Shall burn endlessly,
For I seek revenge,
I end it now,
I strive for an end,
To heaven I go,
Till life do us in.
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ArkAngelGabriell
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2011-03-10 19:41:21]
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Re: Lifes End
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th March 2011 @ 07:49:56 PM AEST
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Very powerful writer.
Keep up the great writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Lifes End
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by Mando on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 05:57:36 AM AEST
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| this is very good keep up the good writing |
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Re: Lifes End
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by Sjensen91 on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 10:08:06 AM AEST
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| this is very deep good job! |
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Re: Lifes End
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by JohnnyFallen on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 01:24:37 PM AEST
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| It is a short piece, but a wonderful writing. It is short but a deep feeling embedded into it at the same time. |
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Re: Lifes End
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 03:09:02 PM AEST
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| Dark, brooding and well written, Good stuff |
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Re: Lifes End
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by Flex4life13 on
Saturday, 12th March 2011 @ 06:38:41 AM AEST
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| Very nice piece, gives the reader chills. |
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Re: Lifes End
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 18th March 2011 @ 05:24:15 PM AEST
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Wow, enjoyed this.
Certainly makes a powerful statement.
Nice write.
Steve |
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