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insomnia
Contributed by
poeticjestix
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Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 03:15:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Clockwise
i'm not clockwise
I don't sleep well
ticking is hell
night disaster
morning faster
boredom stagnates
getting up late
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poeticjestix
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2011-03-11 15:15:30]
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Re: insomnia
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by Mando on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 04:48:22 PM AEST
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| Good poem |
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Re: insomnia
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by emystar on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 09:46:14 PM AEST
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Know what cha mean but insomnia turned me into a writer and I had it running down both sides of my parents family.
I just pick up the pen and clean out my mind.
Blessings, smiles,
emy
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Re: insomnia
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by InfinitePoet on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 08:59:45 PM AEST
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You have no idea just how much i can relate to your lil piece here!!It made the hair stand up on the back of my neck to hear your description!!Keep writing and sharing always!!!
Respectfully,
Dana |
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Re: insomnia
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by DIOGENES on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 02:31:06 PM AEST
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| Sparse verbage, short, choppy phrasing amplify the frustration in the theme. It seems funny when I read it - not so funny when I live it. great piece. thank you. |
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