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Life's true kiss
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
on
Friday, 25th April 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This light
Is too bright
To fight
The dark has no chance, no hope, no way
Not when Im feeling this strong
Not today
I wanted to show you my world tonight
My life, my feelings inside
This light
I want you to see
What you can be
Who you can be
Dont give up without a fight
Come outside with me
Come into this light
Then youll see true beauty
What it really means
To lay in the sunbeams
Lifes true kiss
Im there, this is bliss
And you pushed me here
You made me see
Hear and understand
Now take my hand
Come into these real dreams
Come, lay in the sunbeams
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2003-04-25 01:05:00]
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Re: Life's true kiss
(User Rating: 1 )
by TryYourLuck on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 10:53:02 AM AEST
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| i like this one the most i think. you have a lot of strenth behind your writing. reminds me a little of My Dying Bride, a great band, you have a lot of strength and feelings your a wonderfull poet |
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Re: Life's true kiss
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by TheeCductress on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 10:22:11 AM AEST
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| WOW! One word for you....POWERFUL! Your an excellent writer. |
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Re: Life's true kiss
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 05:03:13 PM AEST
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| ah...beautiful...thankyou... |
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