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Let it all drain
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
on
Friday, 25th April 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Isolation
No determination
There is no pain
Let it all drain
Free from my mind
I dont know how to find
Myself, me
I cant get free
I dont know how to be
How to see
Its all too hard
Its all gone too far
All this cutting and ripping
And scarring and grazing
And feeling and crying
And dying and dying
Over and over and over again
Inside my mind
Dying inside
Im dying and crying
Inside
But Im isolated
I have no determination
But there is no longer any pain
Let it all just drain..
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Re: Let it all drain
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 02:49:15 AM AEST
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Very good poem strongly written. I've been where your at and its a very dark and lonely place. I hope you can pull through and persevere.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Let it all drain
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 11:42:51 PM AEST
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Nicely done, Know what it feels like to be alone in the darkness of life.
Hope you find the lighter side of life.
Keep it up, your poetry is good. |
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Re: Let it all drain
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by TryYourLuck on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 10:36:46 AM AEST
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| hey, not gonna be like i know how it feels and this is some random comment that doesnt mean anything. but im saying... theres things like the things in your poem that are real and from the poets heart things that as he or she writes truely pain them. things like that are what i believe were going on with you as you wrote that. goodluck my friend. |
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