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Hey Kid
Contributed by
TryYourLuck
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Friday, 25th April 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hey kid why are you crying?
Hey kid not like your dying...
Bruises fade,
Cuts heal away,
And he leaves you alone at day.
Hey kid why are you cryin?
Things arent bad as they get.
They aren't bad yet.
why do you fret?
Should just listen
But can't just kiss him
Hey Kid not like your dying...
Your fault cause you denied him
your worth more to him,
then just some sin.
He didnt want to,
you did wrong.
He's right,
your fault you fight.
Hey kid, why are you crying?
not like you dying...
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2003-04-25 03:05:00]
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Re: Hey Kid
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by M on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 11:59:11 AM AEST
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I quite like this poem, 'Bruises fade, cuts heal away', nice lines, not sure if i agree with them though. keep writing,
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Re: Hey Kid
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 11:59:33 AM AEST
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Wow, I'm speechless! And thankyou sooo much for your comments on my poems :-)
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