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The Deep
Contributed by
mando
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Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 10:39:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Deep like thoughts,or deep like oceans
sometimes I feel deeply submerged into a
bottemless pit called life
Considerd a misfit to society
My dreams are more like a fantasy
waiting to be explored each night
Death maybe the only escape
Tomorrow is not promised to anyone
I see the world as a big temporary estate
treasure has no value on the other side,
and broken promises will soon fade away
Only time holds one's destiny
Deep are my thoughts,isolated from my dreams
I'am inprisoned by life,so I look
for death to set me free
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mando
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2011-03-15 10:39:42]
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Re: The Deep
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 06:09:58 PM AEST
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Great writing.
blessings,
emy |
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