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Violins of Violence
Contributed by
allforyou
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Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 11:29:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You use your bow to play,
my heartstrings like a violin.
But the sound that protrudes,
from the hole is violent.
I'm the A-String, you're the D-string,
and our hearts, the G and E-strings.
You're my clandestine musician,
whose love's silent.
And on this path of empathy,
you are the pilot.
You're the one that I've made strides with,
despite the world's advisement.
Your complaisance is a cemetery,
whose sentiment has long been buried.
And now I hear you sing your hymn,
to nothing but your violin.
Copyright ©
allforyou
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2011-03-15 11:29:49]
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Re: Violins of Violence
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 01:47:21 PM AEST
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Amazing write. so different from anything else I've read!
I love how you use a heart and violin to contrast! Lovleyy! |
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Re: Violins of Violence
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 06:22:41 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking.
good job.
Big huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Violins of Violence
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th March 2011 @ 11:03:22 PM AEST
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A very poetic and polite way of telling this person he's an idiot. Sounds like he doesn't deserve you or even a poem written this well. Nicely done.
Tim |
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Re: Violins of Violence
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by JohnnyFallen on
Monday, 21st October 2013 @ 02:49:14 AM AEST
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I like this one since I'm a music person and I also like how "violins" and "violence" are used in the same title even though they sound alike. To me it sounds like he loved a violin more than he did you. That's just the sound of it to me. cx
Anyway it's a good piece of work, keep writing. :)
-Johnny |
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