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A Teenage Obsession
Contributed by
Bevan
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Wednesday, 16th March 2011 @ 09:53:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My love, you are the perfect girl,
Crack open the shell, a beautiful pearl.
Her heart is pure, innocent and kind,
She is the best, most special find.
With her cute smile and her tight hold,
More precious than anything silver or gold.
She is gorgeous, much more than he,
But she opened his heart and hath set him free.
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Bevan
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2011-03-16 09:53:19]
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Re: A Teenage Obsession
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by Tomboy on
Wednesday, 16th March 2011 @ 10:05:57 AM AEST
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| Very nice. I especially like "her tight hold." It evokes all sorts of fascinating images! |
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Re: A Teenage Obsession
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by RachelSixx on
Wednesday, 16th March 2011 @ 03:25:37 PM AEST
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| beautifully written, i love every word. |
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