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Churned and muddied
Contributed by
huwbeauty
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Monday, 21st March 2011 @ 02:08:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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This was once my refuge,
This deluge of substances,
So I could hide from,
My nuances,
But they've churned and muddied,
Dark bloodied my clear waters,
And now they spawn,
Harsh daughters,
Though cloudy I can see,
Dark me in stark reflections,
So now I long,
For direction,
Connection,
And peace.
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2011-03-21 02:08:26]
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Re: Churned and muddied
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 21st March 2011 @ 02:32:17 AM AEST
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Bora Da
This is a really deep and sharp piece of writing.
I so look forward to reading anything by you. This particular poem is amongst your best work. Keep it going, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Churned and muddied
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by InfinitePoet on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 08:33:22 PM AEST
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OMG!!!! That was absolutely excellent!!! I have many on my submitted list like this, i just love 2 see such great short powerful words!!! Keep writing and sharing,please !I think i'm gonna go chech out some of your other works!! why dontcha check out mine sometime if you've got tim e!! id love you 2 comment!!
Respectfully,
Dana |
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