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Forget my soul
Contributed by
full_blur
on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Accept my silence; A courtship in splendor
Forgive my absence; Kiss lips that are not there
Call my name; You cannot remember
Hear my footsteps; Cricket violins a'tremor
Picture my dwelling; A house with no windows
Envision my face; Clouds mockery for wind blows
Forget my soul; The shifting of sand
Erase my being; And take his hand
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Re: Forget my soul
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 02:46:29 PM AEST
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very good Full, thank you for sharing
Lindsey |
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Re: Forget my soul
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by JamesHowlett on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 10:51:22 AM AEST
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| Out of Everything I've read today, this is my favorite! good job. |
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Re: Forget my soul
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by tease_whizz on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 02:26:55 PM AEST
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| beautiful, powerful and excellent use of language. i've read more of your work but haven't had time to comment as yet - you have a very mature and unique style. Kate x |
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Re: Forget my soul
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 04:05:12 PM AEST
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| Again - you've impressed me! The closing line.... *sigh*... tugs at my heart! Wonderful! |
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