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if there were words..
Contributed by
potentialpoet96
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Monday, 21st March 2011 @ 06:18:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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if there were words,
to describe how I feel,
I would write them.
if there were lyrics,
to say what I think,
I would sing them.
not yet am I able to do those,
because I don't know how I feel,
and I don't know what to say.
there is on thing that's for sure,
I love you.
and that's not going to change.
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Re: if there were words..
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by Aspirant on
Monday, 21st March 2011 @ 10:57:31 PM AEST
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| This is good. The lines, however cliche or cheesy, come off sounding genuine & natural. Not sure how you did it, but it's good. |
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