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Masked
Contributed by
White_snow_black_dress
on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My head reluctently recieves you,
My heart distractedly declines.
My soul is screaming 'let him leave',
My lips are asking you 'be mine'.
My life is such a hainus mess
Of hatred and of lies.
My inner child, in screams of pain
And agony, she dies.
I turn to you, tears in my eyes,
Desperation clutches like a glove
And in a shaking voice, i tell you
Of my false love.
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White_snow_black_dress
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2003-04-26 10:35:00]
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Re: Masked
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 10:52:59 AM AEST
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| This is well written.....I liked this one.... |
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Re: Masked
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 02:42:23 PM AEST
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wow, thats excellent, i really enjoyed it...leaves so much to be thought about...
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Re: Masked
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 10:17:53 PM AEST
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great write I really enjoyed this.
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