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The Dawn of Man
Contributed by
Obnoxious_Bread
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Friday, 25th March 2011 @ 04:10:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A time of closed doors,
of blind witnesses, and empty corridors.
The pale blue wings of time
glide gracefully over my solitude
shattering the veil of silence,
of your silence, of my scream...
As you let the sun gaze into your eyes
and grow conscious, dawn is over,
I will become an enclave of the past hours,
as the night`s eternity, and my innocence,
are usurped by daylight.
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2011-03-25 04:10:46]
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Re: The Dawn of Man
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 25th March 2011 @ 04:28:37 AM AEST
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Interesting write, very thought provoking.Really like the lines 'The pale blue wings of time
glide gracefully over my solitude'
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Re: The Dawn of Man
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by duff on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 06:34:25 AM AEST
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| This piece is stunning. Everything about it is intriguing. Each line is incredibly sharp and it just goes taking the reader for a ride that is full of possibility. A fantastic piece of writing that stands on its own. |
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