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test of time
Contributed by
poeticjestix
on
Friday, 25th March 2011 @ 05:11:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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old people, church steeples
such things were built long ago
you see them, you'll be them
now quick, you may soon be slow.
they loved, time shoved
now doddery, they're hand in hand
he's here, she's near
just held, stretched like a rubber band
he feeds her, he needs her
she smiles though she does not know
this stranger, age drains her
in his memory she'll always glow.
His love song. Is yours that strong?
When you pine for a love that failed
she's not all there, but he still cares
who'd brave the storms that their ship has sailed?
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Re: test of time
(User Rating: 1 )
by duff on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 05:48:14 AM AEST
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| I really like this. The entire write is unique from the style it's written in down to the way it reads. There is a profound maturity in your words and this is very well done. |
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