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Where Spririt Meets Soul
Contributed by
Frillycakes
on
Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 04:52:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Where Spirit meets soul
There is life long war
An eternal quest
A struggle for me
Where Spirit meets soul
There is barren land
With trenches surround
As shells fall in screams
And I the traitor
Forsake my birthright
Abandon my death
Towards foreign flags
When my soul cries out
His Spirit takes hold
Where Spirit meets soul
My heart burns with fire
But only one shall win
Whomever I deem
Where Spirit meets soul
I am seen running
Across No Man's land
To the banner's gleam
And I the traitor
Forsake my birthright
Abandon my death
Towards foreign flags
When my soul cries out
His Spirit takes hold
Frillycakes
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Frillycakes
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2011-03-27 16:52:16]
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Re: Where Spririt Meets Soul
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by NightOwl61 on
Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 11:16:54 PM AEST
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| Always thought the spirit and the soul were one. Never considered the thought that they were in the midst of a war. The poem reads well, Interesting perspective |
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Re: Where Spririt Meets Soul
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 12:52:53 PM AEST
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I loved the style and the concept of this write.
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