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Love
Contributed by
sim0ne
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Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 07:41:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You're so loving but distant,
It's so hard to judge you
I can't guess how you're feeling
Sometimes I don't know you
An emptiness builds up
and I loose my thoughts
at the bottom of despair
but you lift me back up
Now I'm floating somedays
blissfull in love
then drowing in despair
but I wont give up
Underneath the happiness
the darkness stays
I struggle to control it
but the secret must stay
Copyright ©
sim0ne
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2011-03-30 07:41:02]
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Re: Love
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by bigj on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 10:14:58 AM AEST
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| this poem portrays your feelings very well. great write |
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Re: Love
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by Shandra on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 11:52:57 AM AEST
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| That's the way love goes!! Nice, very nice!1 ; ) |
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