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Masochristianiy
Contributed by
Cancer
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Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
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come in and observe
my loyal whores
see how obediently they lie
upon the floor
at the sound of my name
every head duly bows
they get off on this punishment
empty-minded cows
at the crack of my whip
their ecstasy is attained
yet, in their daily lives
they seem so restrained
you may think me a mistress
but, i'm oh so much more
i'm the living end
to each one of these whores
my existence is their meaning
my word is their rule
to me, they're just cattle
just weapons, just tools
i use them and leave them
they like it this way
and they all have insanely high
thresholds of pain
no torture can quell them
no humiliation can satisfy
they remain ever faithful
as i steal, kill, and lie
yes my slaves they do love me
though, i kill them so slow
you'll find armies of my zombies
everywhere that you go
i never pick favorites
i treat all of my slaves the same
most call me Master
but god is my name
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Cancer
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Re: Masochristianiy
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 11:32:18 PM AEST
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Heh interesting poem, hate to be them, that on which pain thrives so much.
Good write keep it up Cancer. |
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Re: Masochristianiy
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 12:31:48 AM AEST
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| i liked the poem, very true, nice comparison... i dont think i have even read a poem of urs i didnt like... so keep it up... i agree almost completely with this poem... great work ~Apryl |
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Re: Masochristianiy
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by shelby on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 01:17:12 PM AEST
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WOW!! You always come up with a way to surprise me!! Well done.
Michelle |
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Re: Masochristianiy
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by eric on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 05:37:55 AM AEST
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| Interesting. God is love. Religion stinks. I refused to go to Church, but met God at home. Now I go to to Church, but my interest is in God Himself |
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Re: Masochristianiy
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 08:43:03 PM AEST
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interesting to see inside the mind of the one whom wields the whip.......that high threshold for pain has been taught..........
great write.......... |
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Re: Masochristianiy
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:27:47 PM AEST
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Wow...... i cannot believe the power, the incredible talent behind this write.. i was so absorbed within this, and then i got to the last line and it had me stunned in complete awe.. wonderful poem.. I haven't read anything this good in a LONG time..
charlotte x_x_x |
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