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~Attempt~
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 10:45:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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I whispered into the air at midnight
and sang the praises of you.
Looking past the mean spirit over the years
always trying to consistantly love you.
Often times day-dreaming, speed thinking
of how it all could have been.
If for one moment you would attempt
to give up the nasty and just be a person.
I know deep within my heart
that things are just as they seem.
Years have flown by, lots of tears cried
tears falling into a constant wild river stream.
I could say it doesn't matter
that would be a lie, I think there is enough of that.
So maybe for now, I will just think
and say you have failed the attempt.......
( it is very sad when a person just cannot escape their cycle of abuse and then spends a life time inflicting it on others)
I will not continue on this path anymore!
Copyright ©
shelby
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2011-04-04 10:45:30]
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Re: ~Attempt~
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 05:04:16 PM AEST
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Very powerful, girlfriend.
I can totally relate.
When you've done all you can It's up them to change.
Awesome write.
luv u girl, big huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~Attempt~
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by NightOwl61 on
Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 08:27:31 PM AEST
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| A potent and emotive write, very deep. Really well penned. "I could say it doesn't matter, that would be a lie..." A little gem, inked with a bit of fire. Great work. tfs |
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Re: ~Attempt~
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by hray42 on
Tuesday, 6th March 2012 @ 09:29:04 AM AEST
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| you are quickly gaining a new fan here.. i am really like your poems' flow and choice of words.. i like them a lot.. funny how much i think we write alike.. |
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