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A Touch..
Contributed by
Bevan
on
Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 11:36:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The touch, the smell, every essence of you,
Helps me escape reality, adeiu!
You take my hand and away we fly,
We laugh at every passer by.
As they will know nothing of this,
Staring into their mortal abyss.
You whisk me far, far away,
To beautiful beaches and a stunning bay.
All this from us linking hands,
I cannot wait till we exchange our bands.
To declare in front of all we know,
Love conquers everything, every foe.
I am here for you, here forever,
For you I have conquered every endeavour.
And when it comes, when we must part,
Remember you live forever in my heart.
Copyright ©
Bevan
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2011-04-04 11:36:40]
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Re: A Touch..
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by JRLatin77 on
Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 11:52:52 AM AEST
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This is an excellent poem, I honestly thought it was beautiful. Keep writing because not only have you shown your heart but also a talent. Thank you for sharing and Take care
J.R. |
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Re: A Touch..
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by Ike on
Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 02:14:49 PM AEST
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| This is a really good poem. I love the rhythmical sound of it. I also love the word adeiu...how did you ever come up with that? |
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Re: A Touch..
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 06:11:34 PM AEST
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Here you've evoked something so gentle yet very powerful.
It gave me that sweet feeling of calmness and warmth.
I really enjoyed reading this...
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: A Touch..
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by NightOwl61 on
Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 07:49:00 PM AEST
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| skillfully and thoughtfully penned. I like the unity and flow of this piece. Your words are chosen well, and the construction is quite flawless. A beautiful write. |
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Re: A Touch..
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by 619Prisoner on
Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 05:48:19 PM AEST
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| Very clever poem. you have a natural talent. |
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