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bleakly N and out of love
Contributed by
danilove209
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Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 12:20:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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3 cards full of memories
Not warm, too bleak and unexposed
Two twined as the third is out of synergy
And all three finally see how things broke
26 times of blissful & amative love described as chemistry
All lead to a wishful mountain top of hugs & one unproven entity
I walked back down 11 miles to a lovers rush that was sent to me
I followed this path and thought very much this was meant to be
Until I followed and followed this love into the middle of a winter freeze
And this cold wind always blows
All thats left is a beautiful stem- she was the rose
And a road that ends where this love has froz
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Re: bleakly N and out of love
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 04:33:41 AM AEST
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| Well done. This is a very fine piece of writing. Nice rhyme and very easy on the mind. Thanks for sharing. |
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