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I died that day.
Contributed by
619prisoner
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 06:06:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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If you could put all of your pain into one moment
when would it be?
What sort of things happened,
turned this into a tragedy?
Was it when she said good bye
or did she even send a reply?
Did it give you a heartache
in which you would rather die?
If you could put all your sorrow in one moment
how did it happen?
Did your heart drop to the floor
because of someone's sin?
Did you give it your all
to something not mutual?
when did you realize its fake
how long before you hit the wall?
If you could put all your loneliness into one moment.
how long did you cry?
could your tears fill a pool
in the room in which you lie?
Was it because of your own fault?
Did you brake and make the relationship halt?
and she kept on driving
while you lay on the asphalt?
If I could put it all... my pain, my sorrow my loneliness into one moment...
It would be the day, I lost you.
Love so true
The limitless sky so blue
But i never had a clue....
I never had a clue,
that all the things i did for you,
was pushing you away,
until that fateful day...
I hope none of you have to
feel the way that I felt that day.
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619prisoner
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2011-04-05 18:06:51]
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Re: I died that day.
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by jtkzlimz on
Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 03:18:37 PM AEST
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| That was a beautiful write, as i was reading i was answering everyone of those i know how that feels. |
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