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Unfathomable
Contributed by
The_unknown
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Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 01:44:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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There's a mysterious emptiness holding onto me
Words can not fill the spaces in between
They would fall into oblivion
Perished forevermore
There was no wrong done
Just a soul evaporated and goodbyes unsaid
I'm fading into the background
My soul is twisting and turning
Itching and twitching
All I feel,, though, is my heavy breathing
Time doesn't matter, right now
I'm on pause while the whole world is
On repeat
And I feel myself throwing up everything
That ever made me who I am
*I wish I could have said goodbye.
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The_unknown
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2011-04-10 01:44:55]
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Re: Unfathomable
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 05:41:30 AM AEST
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| Painfully but eloquently expressed and I think summarised in the line I'm on pause while the whole world is on repeat.,can feel the inner turmoil and longing for peace, whilst needing closure.Unfathomable is a great title as this whole journey is alone and inexplicable to others just something that has to be gone through. |
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Re: Unfathomable
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by shelby on
Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 12:24:29 PM AEST
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Incredible verse here. So many parts so powerful. Good work.
Yes I think we all at times have that moment of regret of not being able to say goodbye. It stings the heart.
Hugs
Michelle |
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