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Boxed In
Contributed by
scottstone
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Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 11:49:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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There once was a place called Sell Up Your Space
They saw everything from a screen
And the outside world to them looked oh so strange
Because it wasnt inside their tv
For the box held all the answers
The best ones with bigger screens
And they themselves lived in their boxes
With foggy windows for them to see
And they went to school where they learned in boxes
And at lunch open their lunchbox
Driving home with wheels on boxes
So they could watch their 200 channel box
And they all were so unhappy
So in their boxes they sometimes cried
So they all bought bigger boxes
But they were empty on the inside
Copyright ©
scottstone
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2011-04-10 23:49:35]
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Re: Boxed In
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by northernlights on
Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 05:19:20 AM AEST
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| For the box held all the answers....... great line full of challenge and questioning. I love the concept you are exploring here and the challenge to modern culture the emptiness of the box and the paralell with life, interesting write. |
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