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In Agony
Contributed by
springchic1979
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Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
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Every heartbeat is incomplete
Since you have gone away.
I cannot sleep; I sit and weep.
I loathe each passing day.
Night after night my hand does write
The pain I feel within.
My misery, incessantly,
Flows freely from my pen.
Small searing spheres of salty tears
Leave marks upon my face;
Their constant pain drives me insane--
I long for your embrace.
I want so much to feel your touch;
And make sweet love to you.
To have you here holding me near
There's nothing I wont do...
For just one kiss I'd slit my wrists;
I'd sell my mortal soul.
Forget the odds I'd defy Gods
And gladly pay their toll...
Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright 2003 Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©
springchic1979
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2003-04-27 07:05:00]
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Re: In Agony
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 08:33:05 AM AEST
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you expressed your pain vividly..a very good write
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Re: In Agony
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by blain on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 08:45:27 AM AEST
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| doesn't sound like its worth it? cheer up man... =/ all the best... u'll get over it eventually and meet new better pple who won't hurt u ^^ |
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Re: In Agony
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by springchic1979 on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 10:23:03 AM AEST
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I appreciate your comment and words of wisdom Blain, and for anyother person that would be good advice.
I am a happily married woman who is in agony only because her husband is in the US Army National Guard and was sent over seas.
I am not suicidal but I just wanted to express just how much I loved him and missed him...
I just implied extreme actions to hopefully convey just how desperately I miss him and that I would give anything to have him here with me again.
Yvonne |
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Re: In Agony
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by springchic1979 on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 10:25:00 AM AEST
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Thank you for your wonderful comment Shari.
Yvonne |
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Re: In Agony
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by Dot on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 10:43:50 AM AEST
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| Beautiful sentiment. Hang on and pray that he'll be coming home soon. Dot |
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Re: In Agony
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 06:34:20 AM AEST
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| I also hope he returns soon ... this is a wonderful heartfelt write ... take care ... Jan |
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Re: In Agony
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 01:50:09 PM AEST
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| write it out girl! write it out! this poem is so excellent; but in the same breath i breathe those words my heart goes out to you, 'cause i know how much your missing him, he's missing you too, big huge hugs n' love, always nessa |
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Re: In Agony
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by springchic1979 on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:14:43 PM AEST
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Thank you Dot. *hugs*
Yvonne |
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Re: In Agony
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by springchic1979 on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:17:15 PM AEST
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Thank you Jan. *hugs*
Yvonne |
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Re: In Agony
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by springchic1979 on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:21:14 PM AEST
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Thank you Nessa. *hugs*
I miss him so bad...
Yvonne
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Re: In Agony
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 01:39:43 AM AEST
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"He's not the only one" (poem I wrote a few months back might help)
A really touching write. |
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Re: In Agony
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by springchic1979 on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 02:32:47 AM AEST
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Lol Wrybod! I read your poem and it was funny...
but I am Happily married, my husband is overseas fighting for USA. Though I imply taking drastic actions I would never do it. I value my life, I am quite content.
I just wanted to get across how deep my love is...and how much I miss him....
Thank you for commenting Wrybod :)
Yvonne |
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