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Forever
Contributed by
baritonefreak
on
Thursday, 14th April 2011 @ 06:30:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to protect you,
And prove to myself that I can.
The hurt is there.
So are the words.
I dont want to bother you
with my silly thoughts,
but I can't bear to kep them to myself.
I know that I'm crazy.
You assure me that I'm not.
When you say that,
I know it's the only thing keeping me alive.
When I want to die,
I think of you.
Your face,
telling me what I want to hear,
that you want to help.
But, your eyes do show your fear.
You hold me close, and everything disapears for a while.
Sometimes I wonder if it's reality, or all a dream.
And when it's dark,
your face tells me things I dont want to hear.
It's getting harder to seperate the truth from lies.
But,
When I see your face,
and I know that everything will be okay.
and that you'll stand by me through it all.
I can tell you love me,
and sometimes I forget just how much.
I am no where good enough for you,
but I shall spend my life
proving to you that we are perfect for each other,
and trying to explain how much I love you.
And I always will.
Forever.
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baritonefreak
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2011-04-14 06:30:56]
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Re: Forever
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 14th April 2011 @ 10:48:19 AM AEST
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| Don't be so down. :) I'm sure your bf thinks you are good enough for him, and you should too. Just make sure to remember he was always there for you. A lot of people tend to forget that once they start to do better. |
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Re: Forever
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by chrisdavid on
Thursday, 14th April 2011 @ 01:07:22 PM AEST
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He sounds like quite a catch. He's made it clear, by standing by you, that he totally loves you. Those guys are hard to come by, so grab the opportunity with both hands. You won't regret it!
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Forever
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 15th April 2011 @ 08:27:46 AM AEST
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| I can feel the Emotional Torture in this flow |
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Re: Forever
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th April 2011 @ 09:03:26 AM AEST
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| good job in showing the emotion. |
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