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Buzzard.
Contributed by
cashfan1
on
Friday, 15th April 2011 @ 03:12:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Circling the breeze the buzzard's cry is tossed
Like flotsam on the waves of an oceanic sky.
Hitching a ride on a passing cloud
He weeps with joy at spring time coming.
Admonishing the cloud he drops away
And like a promise unfulfilled,
He tumbles away through the mid air loneliness.
Then, with wings of pointed perfection, he steadies himself
And hovers there between earth and paradise.
Catching his reflection cast in golden light
On the gentle swell of the hill,
He cries with astonishment at his own beauty,
Takes a mocking bow
And takes to the blue clear horizon of his world.
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Re: Buzzard.
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 12:20:50 AM AEST
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| Hi Dennis great introduction,then a journey of feeling as wonderfully free as the buzzard,in true poetic excellence you are my connection with what you see and what you feel, enabling me to lose myself in your world. |
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Re: Buzzard.
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 09:31:16 AM AEST
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'He cries in astonishment at his own beauty"
what a Excellent line
in a Excellent flow...... |
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Re: Buzzard.
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by Tomboy on
Sunday, 17th April 2011 @ 07:21:33 AM AEST
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| very wonderful inmagies |
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Re: Buzzard.
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by spud on
Wednesday, 11th May 2011 @ 05:38:21 AM AEST
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Hi Dennis,
You should accompany this wonderful piece
with images of flight. Great combination!
Tommy
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