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Tranquility
Contributed by
thistle_and_fern
on
Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 05:35:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Misty topped mountains
Clear running streams
Soft falling raindrops
Surreal as it seems.
The warmth of a sunrise
The crash of the waves
On stoney laid beaches
With well hidden caves.
The slow wake each morning
The sweet smelling breeze
That tickles the trees trunks
And scatters the leaves.
The lingering eye lock
The shy touch of skin
the thrill of a first love
lets the magic begin.
The beauty of sunsets
The smoothness of wine
The mellowed out music
since beginning of time.
This is the wonder
of mystical ways
the tranquility moments
turns stresses away.
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thistle_and_fern
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2011-04-16 17:35:05]
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Re: Tranquility
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 07:43:16 PM AEST
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A tranquility of awesome word picture.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Tranquility
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 07:44:09 PM AEST
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| Oh I love this....it flows like a gentle stream through an undulating landscape.... Nicely written... |
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Re: Tranquility
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 03:59:34 AM AEST
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| DAMN! nice job capturing the very essence of tranquility. I feel calmer just reading this. :) |
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Re: Tranquility
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 10th June 2011 @ 02:06:19 PM AEST
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After a week that seemed to go on forever I now feel totally chilled and peaceful after reading this.
There was a lovely understated charm about this and you've captured serenity and calm so well.
No need to spend money on pampering myself now!!
Steve |
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Re: Tranquility
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by JimKoz on
Thursday, 12th December 2013 @ 12:58:23 AM AEST
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This is such a beautiful piece! Thanks for the lovely read, mate.
"The lingering eye lock
The shy touch of skin
the thrill of a first love
lets the magic begin.
The beauty of sunsets
The smoothness of wine
The mellowed out music
since beginning of time." -Capturing some of the best things in life upon these lines. :) |
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