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Inside a dead man's heart
Contributed by
Majidlawal
on
Monday, 18th April 2011 @ 02:25:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As you lay me down and put me to sleep
see my ruthless departure as a reward and celebrate my righteous exit
I never chose to die alone yet everyone grieves
lost in the whirlwind of the hereafter
strirred by images of blurred fantasies
They say i now rest in perfect peace but inside the depths of hell i burn
Trapped by visions of family and friends crying but how long will they mourn?
Dear Lord if only i could start from scratch
surely the world shall feel the wrath of the words emanating from a dead man's heart...
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2011-04-18 14:25:32]
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Re: Inside a dead man's heart
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 02:58:00 AM AEST
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| Regret seems to be the main center of this piece. Well done. |
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Re: Inside a dead man's heart
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by Majidlawal on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 12:31:36 PM AEST
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| Yeah thats like what inspired me to write the poem...i'm gr8ful |
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