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I Don't Like Chocolate
Contributed by
northernlights
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Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 01:08:05 AM in AEST
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I dont like chocolate,
The feel of smooth,creamy shell as it breaks gently on the tongue
To release the liquid heaven, to bring warmth and delight
To every taste bud.
I dont like chocolate!
I dont crave a piece of Utopia as I screech the car to a halt,
Elbow my way through the crowds, arrive at the shelf and
Take the box from the hands of
A child!
Oh yes, I really dont like chocolate!
When weighing up the delights of a lettuce leaf, a comparison
Of health, weighing heavily against the love, nay the neverending
Loyalty of my whole body and soul, yearning for a piece
Of slowly melting ecstasy, a soul in paradise, a heart warm and
Full!
Because,
I really, really, really,
Dont like chocolate!
I hope you realise that I would never want you to ever, give me
A piece of Nirvana, a taste of Eden, not even a piece of Empyrean
Enchantment, by ever allowing my flesh
To feel the total and utter inner sigh,
Of a body caressed by shere unadulterated pleasurable
Sensation,
Of
Complete
Satisfaction!
For I hope now you know
I dont!
Like
Chocolate!!
Copyright ©
northernlights
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2011-04-19 01:08:05]
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Re: I Don't Like Chocolate
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 02:51:57 AM AEST
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| What kinda chocolate are we talking about here? :p |
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Re: I Don't Like Chocolate
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 04:54:54 AM AEST
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| Nicely done Anna, but you really don't like chocolate!! I wonder? Great stuff and as always a cracking read. |
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Re: I Don't Like Chocolate
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 06:16:16 AM AEST
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| love it nice write so descriptive and chocolatey lol |
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Re: I Don't Like Chocolate
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 07:34:23 AM AEST
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Great write.
Deadwriter
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Re: I Don't Like Chocolate
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by poeticjestix on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 02:12:10 PM AEST
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| the lady doth prostest too much, me !thinks |
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Re: I Don't Like Chocolate
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 23rd April 2011 @ 11:41:34 AM AEST
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I loved this write because of the imagery mostly
I picture that fiend (of anykind)In a pile full of
empty chocolate wrappers,
licking their fingers sucking their thumbs to get everybit
of that chocolatety goodness
nearly hysterical because it's just about gone
as they start to think of their next fix,
denial's an animal, nicely written
-UNORTHODOX |
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