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Don't Know What I Would Do Without You
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 01:47:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I don't know what
I would do without you
but I
sure would like to find out,
I'm so tired of everyday being the same
with you always in control.
You're a twisted sister
the queen
of the underworld,
my love lies bleeding
dripping
and you drink it all.
one of these days
I will have the power
and
I'll regain my soul,
I will be free to do different things
without you in control.
It'll be so peaceful
of that I have no doubt,
though I don't know what I will do without you
I can't wait
to find out.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2011-04-19 01:47:00]
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Re: Don't Know What I Would Do Without You
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 02:53:37 AM AEST
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Let the time be now... down with control freaks!
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Re: Don't Know What I Would Do Without You
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 04:51:30 AM AEST
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| A very deep and heartfelt piece of writing. Well done. |
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Re: Don't Know What I Would Do Without You
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 11:01:24 AM AEST
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| Twisted sister,Queen of the underworld, strong anger expressed in sarcasm,can feel the start of a revolution and a life about to change as strength builds and freedom calls,empowering write. |
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Re: Don't Know What I Would Do Without You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 11:35:27 AM AEST
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| Emotion expressed well |
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Re: Don't Know What I Would Do Without You
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by clae-marie on
Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 09:25:53 AM AEST
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| it almost felt like the poem was talking bout me a few yrs ago. crazy stepmothers, or at least thats what i had lol |
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Re: Don't Know What I Would Do Without You
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2012 @ 10:08:11 AM AEST
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oh no, so sad. Again, you make me wonna cry but I'm sure that was the intention of the write. ssssigh,
emy
Sorry, I just got a new key board and it can't keep up with my fingers.
Bummer. |
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