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beach
Contributed by
poeticjestix
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Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 02:47:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Sea and shore
forever together
sometimes at war
in stormy weather
one will advance
the other retreats
no man's land?
the glorious beach
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Re: beach
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 11:11:28 PM AEST
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| An onion poem short and sweet but with lots of layers,very effective. |
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Re: beach
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 20th April 2011 @ 01:32:01 AM AEST
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| Lovely stuff, this is short, simple but beautifully executed. Reading this I am on top of a cliff looking down at the receding tide. Well done. |
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Re: beach
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 12:46:00 AM AEST
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There's so many meanings/symbols to this...brilliant!
take care
-K.Z. |
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