|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Wait For Me
Contributed by
shanat
on
Friday, 22nd April 2011 @ 02:40:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
|
wait for me
she`s running ahead towards the stream
We used to walk there slowly
arm in arm like a dream
her lantern a fire-fly sway
this dark night
Through the grass a mile away
wait for me.
Sitting in the tree
Above the rock of lime
this time tonight
i am yours and you are mine
Stars blowing in the wind
or are they merely seeds
some land in the water
and some land in the weeds
Beneath it all the mangrove moon
Peaks while we kiss
A silohoute of two
A powerfull moment exists.
Copyright ©
shanat
... [
2011-04-22 02:40:26]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Wait For Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 22nd April 2011 @ 05:00:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| so descriptive i love your style |
|
|
Re: Wait For Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 23rd April 2011 @ 01:26:48 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| You have a wonderful easy style of writing. Very descriptive is this piece, lovely rhyme, well done. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
