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Eye-Land See
Contributed by
shanat
on
Saturday, 23rd April 2011 @ 03:25:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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You race so you can see it
you feel like a deer new born
you hide from almost everyone
you're a ship, a frozen storm
Your secret caves a vision
but your holes just to small
so with your cries
you fill up your eyes
and its safe and gently warm
I guess you cant concieve it
your secrets unsecure
a broken helm
a bleeding realm
and time is your only cure.
Copyright ©
shanat
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2011-04-23 03:25:01]
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Re: Eye-Land See
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 11:56:19 AM AEST
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very moving piece, you might consider taking
is out of the last line, otherwise perfect
flow, very beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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