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My Life
Contributed by
sexygurlii69
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 12:12:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i lie a wake at night,
knowing that things aren't right.
life to me seems like a struggle,
with so many feelings and emotions i have to juggle.
many guys tried to make me hurt,
but in the end i felt like dirt.
they made me scared,
and feeling like no one cared.
my feelings and emotions were used,
but worst of all i was mentally abused.
people may think im a phony,
but in reality im just lonely.
now you have the knowledge of the feelings i've expressed,
knowing all this makes me depressed.
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2011-04-26 00:12:52]
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Re: My Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by mvvenkataraman on
Sunday, 1st May 2011 @ 01:13:04 AM AEST
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Dear respected sexygurlii69,
Your thoughts are crystal clear
You have poetic capacity dear
All your emotions you write
In that way prove your might
Your poem is beautiful extremely
You exhibit your ideas supremely
Be happy and start afresh
Use poetry to nicely refresh
I thank for your superb poem
In rhyme and rhythm. it is a gem.
With best wishes, Yours sincerely,
mvvenkataraman
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