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This Town
Contributed by
theurbanpoet
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 08:57:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In this town, not even the birds are free,
Even they are chained to the sky,
She asked how were going to get out of here,
If we dont have wings to fly.
In this town, not even the trees are free,
Even they are chained to the ground,
She asked how were going to get out of here,
Even leaves of freedom fall down.
In this town, as our dreams begin to fall,
I look around and I feel nothing at all,
Because she went up, but I came down,
When she left me in this town.
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2011-04-26 08:57:10]
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Re: This Town
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by Jewelly on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 10:50:49 AM AEST
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| omg, i almost had tears come to my eyes when i read the last 2 lines. it's a strangely beautiful tale (and i don't think "strange" is bad!) and the length is perfect. good use of imagery-- i saw the birds and the trees. |
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Re: This Town
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2011 @ 07:40:24 AM AEST
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| Wonderful imagery indeed! A very strong exciting write, very well done. |
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Re: This Town
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by quickster414 on
Thursday, 28th April 2011 @ 06:17:12 AM AEST
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| wow that good |
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