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What Happened?
Contributed by
Pigglet
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Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You used to be the nicest man I knew,
but your temper just grew.
I kn ow I'm not good,
but I help out when no one else would.
I know I'm not all that,
but I can do more then that cat.
You make jokes all day,
we can't tell when you are playing.
You used to be fun,
what happened to the sun?
Your dog is more important then me,
but how could that be?
Copyright ©
Pigglet
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2003-04-27 16:35:00]
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Re: What Happened?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 05:38:34 PM AEST
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Cute..hope all that has changed now..
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Re: What Happened?
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by Jilli_bean on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 06:10:29 PM AEST
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Brillant...and yet it still had a good rhyme scheme ...i love it ...good job
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Re: What Happened?
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by Apartment213 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:58:19 AM AEST
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| i hope things got better its a good poem though. |
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