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a good time
Contributed by
djstoute897
on
Friday, 29th April 2011 @ 06:35:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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hold my hand
dont let me fall
lets be frainds
and tose a ball
we can dance
all night,
and play all day
jump around
and say
hey hey
yes we are
older
but who cares
lets have a good
time
and go to the fair
we can have fun
we can talk
alot
you could let it out
and tell me what
u thout
we got really
close and
that made me happy
but lets be glad it
wasnt to sappy
i didnt cry those happy
tears
but yes i smiled in
cheer
we did some crazy
stuff,
but we are just
ingoying life
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djstoute897
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2011-04-29 18:35:16]
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Re: a good time
(User Rating: 1 )
by hacktastic on
Saturday, 30th April 2011 @ 12:24:40 AM AEST
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Two things:
(1) There are a few words that need to be ran through spell check.
(2) Please show this to whom ever inspired this. They will love it. It is very thoughtful of you to take the time to put all of that together.
There is a sweet sort of purity to this and I like it. Nice job.
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