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loose fit
Contributed by
plous
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Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A scattered pile of broken dreams and promises,
A portrait of a world, vines and lollipops,
Flowers are not pretty, the false allure of a bright day,
Crime and punishment, heros and villains,
Bloody banners with atomic clean,
A pile of salvations, cause and effect,
The entropy of illusion,
Conditional free will with clowns and barter,
Tools for happiness with the angry bears,
I like candy, vcrs, television,
Hamsters dont were makeup, unless you make them,
When you dont want anything from life you go to grad school,
Copyright ©
plous
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2003-04-27 20:05:00]
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Re: loose fit
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 10:01:26 PM AEST
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Huh?? I must admit I don't understand this, but your words were beautiful and flowery.
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Re: loose fit
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 09:11:33 AM AEST
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I have to admit that I am not sure what you are talking about either but I like the imagery.
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Re: loose fit
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by Wilder on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 02:47:46 PM AEST
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| This was an unusual one. It seems very Lewis Carroll inspired. I liked it though, it was different. |
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Re: loose fit
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by razorbladerose on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 07:23:37 PM AEST
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| Telling it like the way it really is on certain topics...that's what i get from it! Great write, becasue it makes the reader think, and abled to come up with its own clarification! |
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