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Sadness
Contributed by
Dirkj
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Thursday, 5th May 2011 @ 12:53:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Only memories
Faint memories
Of touches and kisses
Lingers on
How long will they
Still be there
As sadness strikes me down
I would like to cry
One more time
My tears running through
Your eyes
But only sadness
Fills my tired eyes
All my tears have gone
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2011-05-05 00:53:49]
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Re: Sadness
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 5th May 2011 @ 08:03:18 AM AEST
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Really good writing., even tho sad.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Sadness
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by NightOwl61 on
Thursday, 5th May 2011 @ 12:43:01 PM AEST
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| Love and Loss are a part of life, we all go through it. A nifty write, captured the true feel of waking up to the emptiness. Enjoyed the read. tfs |
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