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Killer Smile
Contributed by
spike
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Thursday, 12th May 2011 @ 08:24:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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he crossed my path in '62
a disaster that took its share
had his hands on my throat,
but I managed to crawl out of there
and again, in '98
car hit by a derailed freight;
crushed my leg but I survived
though since, I never could walk straight
that last winter his touch was cold
a killer smile, he was getting bold;
I thought this time he'd come for me
but by the summer, a recovery
he gets away with all his crimes,
a dark, sadistic sort of fun
picks us off time after time;
stalks us all until he's done
a piece of us til nothing's left,
his calling card, those bereft
watch your back, my best advice
this reaping soul does not play nice.
Copyright ©
spike
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2011-05-12 20:24:54]
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Re: Killer Smile
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 03:18:33 AM AEST
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| ahhh death, his hunger is never sated :p nice portrayal. |
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Re: Killer Smile
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 05:54:18 AM AEST
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| Such fine writing! Dark and menacing, beautifully expressed. Well done. |
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Re: Killer Smile
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by poeticjestix on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 11:26:38 PM AEST
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| Ah well. Enjoy it while it lasts. I feel sorry for death, he never meets people when they are at their best. I suspect it's a bit boring, and sometimes messy. He could never maintain a relationship. "what did you do today dear!", would get a tad repetitive. |
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Re: Killer Smile
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by InfinitePoet on
Monday, 23rd May 2011 @ 11:57:31 AM AEST
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this is a classic poem that i feel is talking about a stalker or an abuser of some sort!! Man i been there done that rode that rollercoaster!! it's nothing to take lighly orturn your back on!! Keep writing andposting!
Always,
Dana |
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Re: Killer Smile
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by spud on
Thursday, 9th June 2011 @ 07:38:22 AM AEST
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Hi Spike,
Well scripted. Has the grim reaper been
stalking you again? Keep your head down,
mate!
Tommy
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Re: Killer Smile
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 06:29:48 PM AEST
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Ya say what ya need to say to capture the moment with out sayin' what yer sayin' at all. Now that's a magnificence requirement. Ya met it. As you know,
I've tumbled through thirteen moves of life 'n' death and I watch my back fer somethin' like that smilin' like that again.
Great write, Spike
wabl
Ken |
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