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Lost World
Contributed by
sia
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Friday, 13th May 2011 @ 04:03:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It''s a song that can''t be sung
A book that can''t be read,
On the walls of your heart, a picture that can''t be hung...
A memory that can''t be dead.
It''s the dream you can never dream
A wound that can never heal,
A thing that''s never like what it may seem...
A feeling you can never feel.
It''s the life you can only dream of
A future you can only wish for,
A bliss you never know of...
And the past that always makes you live for.
It''s a song of missing notes
A rhythm of mute beats,
An ocean full of sinking boats...
And a necklace of fallen beads.
It''s an unwritten story...
A never composed symphony...
An unsolved mystery...
... Just harsh destiny.
Copyright ©
sia
... [
2011-05-13 04:03:40]
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Re: Lost World
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Friday, 13th May 2011 @ 03:07:06 PM AEST
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| Aw thats sad.. such beautifully.. confusing words.. all wrapped in one poem x |
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Re: Lost World
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 14th May 2011 @ 03:15:53 AM AEST
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| some things seem always out of reach. this poem portrayed that perfectly. nicely done. :) |
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Re: Lost World
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by purplestary on
Monday, 16th May 2011 @ 05:52:22 PM AEST
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| beautiful and sad..what a combination. I love these words..what a description of the lost world we live in.. |
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Re: Lost World
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by Butterflyperfect on
Tuesday, 17th May 2011 @ 12:10:10 AM AEST
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The way you embody your thoughts in this is intricate and delectable... It makes it easy to read, feel, and sympathize... Very well done. Here is a standing ovation. I really enjoyed this one. :)
*Brenda* |
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Re: Lost World
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 17th July 2011 @ 01:03:54 PM AEST
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| I liked this very much...Shows a keen sense of something more we all could be...Beautifully done...Russ |
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