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DEVIL
Contributed by
petulinka
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Thursday, 19th May 2011 @ 06:03:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Isnt it just easier to fade away in dust dark
So much very scarier then to fly up way too high
Marked by a flash-light gnose, your heart cease to beat
Dark scar in your soul, no hard feelings to be meet
As your mind go black n white, you stay really still
Breathing up down chest wont move, you need settled bill
Coughing stains on earthy vest, say what you are told
Suffocating in the course, your core has been sold
Story will end as it has, faultless beauty called
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2011-05-19 18:03:38]
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Re: DEVIL
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 19th May 2011 @ 09:59:07 PM AEST
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| Wow I honestly really loved that piece. It had a lot of deep thought and feeling behind it, which is something I love. GREAT poem. (a few tiny grammar errors, but no big deal) |
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