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Silence
Contributed by
Tomboy
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Tuesday, 31st May 2011 @ 10:41:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Relax, let no noise,
distraction enter into your mind
Enter a dimension, no senses age you
Your soul, mind being at rest
Floating in an empty space
where time is in a state of limbo
Separated from reality
into endless nothingness
Leave channels of self empty, free
Dead, no life, or voices
Imprints upon the conscience and inner man.
All now comes into focus.
Decision is made,
Conclusions reached.
Copyright ©
Tomboy
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2011-05-31 10:41:22]
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Re: Silence
(User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on
Tuesday, 31st May 2011 @ 12:31:15 PM AEST
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Your thought process is flawless
you deliver with such clarity
I believe this is the first poem of yours, I have had the honor of reading
I truly admire this passage, because I have been there
and there is no other place like it
a refreshingly brillant piece
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