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Me Name's Not Jack!
Contributed by
northernlights
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2011 @ 11:14:54 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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For such murderous crime
Ill be doin no time,
Oive ad the same name since Oi was a Nipper!
Ill not be one to confess,
Leave the fun to the press!
My infamous crown, Jack the Ripper!
Oh wat a merry dance.
Them policeman did prance.
Givin me oighty toighty trappins of Noble birf!
Just look at them ands
For carryin out me plans
Deliverin justice to them hores on this earf!
A slaughterer by trade
Me loikes a pretty maid
But shed rather live a life in disgrace!
So I showed her deafs door
Left her in pieces on the floor
With knife wiped er smile from er face!
From the churchyard thems winking!
Till the early ours still drinking!
Showin me all their womanly wiles!
But with me in their dreams,
Youll not ear their screams!
Thats one less to parade Satans smiles!
With leather apron of blood.
I trudge through the mud.
And not one passer by stops and stares!
For oim local you see!
For thems lets me be!
Next victim shows Ive caught em unawares
A soul full of black!
With devil on ma back!
Moi thirst for their blood grows stronger!
This centurys sayin you can trace.
Dont cut off nose to spite yer face
So I saved ers from getting any longer!
Foive murders you said were moine!
Four Ill accept and the one decline!
For oim a proud and calculated soul.
You will find the fifth,
Is held only in myth.
Thats the one they found still WHOLE!!
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northernlights
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2011-05-31 11:14:54]
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Re: Me Name's Not Jack!
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 09:55:13 AM AEST
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powerful write going on here my friend!
Michelle |
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Re: Me Name's Not Jack!
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by Natkingcole on
Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 02:11:51 PM AEST
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| Nice take on a poem |
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Re: Me Name's Not Jack!
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 2nd June 2011 @ 03:45:09 AM AEST
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A finely depicted piece,takes you right into the mind
of a cold calculating murderer
this passage IS powerful and dangerous,
because you can feel his sense of power
and control over the world around him
and who wouldn't love that power
the darkness which is the core of this masterpiece is so vivid,
that anyone who reads can't help losing a piece of their soul
magnificent and elite form and delivery
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: Me Name's Not Jack!
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by Spike on
Thursday, 2nd June 2011 @ 11:38:17 PM AEST
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a chilling disclosure from the villan who is meant to be the father of serial killers. All the impulses, deficits and cognitive distortions of Jack are as keen as the edge of his blade. Nice work, eh!
Spike |
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Re: Me Name's Not Jack!
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 3rd June 2011 @ 01:25:55 AM AEST
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| Great stuff as always Anna. Your work is so refreshing I really look forward to reading your poetry. Well done. |
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Re: Me Name's Not Jack!
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 6th June 2011 @ 01:59:45 PM AEST
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well done
I enjoyed it so much |
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Re: Me Name's Not Jack!
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by spud on
Thursday, 9th June 2011 @ 07:14:11 AM AEST
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Hi Anna,
While reading through this dastardly piece
I had in my mind 'Mac the knife' by bobby
darin - though your lyrics don't exactly fit
with the beat of the tune - but just as gruesome.
Nightmare stuff!
Tommy
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Re: Me Name's Not Jack!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 03:05:44 PM AEST
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I have this desire to stand and applaud ! ! !
I love the way you spelled this phonetically. I could here and see as if I had gone back in time and was really there.
Now me be wondering if you not really being an Anna yet Jack in disguise! :p
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